MassGas's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Plague Doctor]

I like the effect of water especiali at his mask. It's real well made but I think you should use more white to light him from one side a little.

[it's such a long way down.]

Nice one. I like scenes which mostly shows background. Also It's very minimal and have a big contrast of black and white what I really adore. I don't know about these characters.. They seems wierd to me but it's your conception.

Dooffrie responds:

Thanks. The idea with the two figures was to show how life choices can lead to different outcomes. The white figure stays the straight and narrow path, without veering into chaos(the darkness that surrounds him) and yet they still end up holding onto it all for dear life. The black figure indulges in chaos, without care, and he remains calm and unscathed by it all.

[M4DNESS OPERATION: HUNT 20]

You had a pretty style when you were using a brush. now it looks more clear but I'm lack of your brush:(. It gave a nice background to your works but I could say you used a little to much water.

[clean Hollow girl]

I like the color. You used nice brush and tehnic to color that but I think the hairs are made in diffrient styl than the rest of image. I think hairs are a little bit too realistic and forgot to add black lines around.

Alef321 responds:

yeh, sometimes I add the blacklines ,sometimes I don't for the hair. depends on how I feel for it.

[Sunchez]

I like the style and when his hairs shine. It' s a good idea. You should add some blur at sun for bigger shine effect but it could lag it so hard, so I think is well made.

ZeTrystan responds:

You know what? I ACTUALLY added the blurry heat effect first, but it made the animation way to "heavy". :'> Was kinda bummed about it.

[A skele Baby promo]

It's cute :D. I would like to know how big it's. Ooo and also I think that it's coat might be a little dirter to make it look more darkly.

linda-mota responds:

it's about a foot long. These ones had some sort of pearl looking finish to the heads which is why they kinda look like that. Along with that burlap material. the rest of them were wrapped in black lace which a lot of people liked a lot.

[Vibrant Desolation]

I like the colors. The brightnes and high contrast makes me feel happy. I think it's good that they are not so natural. It makes image more interesting but I thing that lines are sometimes too ragged and distorted.

[Family portrait]

It's a real greate work. I love shading. I would like to learn that ;) . Also the fabric is well made , but I think that this persons proportions are made wrong. Correct me if i'm wrong but head seems little too big. Her eyes are so creepy. Looking at them makes me scare, but thats good.

[Self Portrait Animation]

Are you making any long flash movies?? If yes, I would like to see them. This animation has potential for me. I'm not a greate animator but I like this work. Pretty orginal and looks like 3ď. I think you should try making animation movies. With good plot it can be nice.

calslater responds:

Thanks! I'm about to release a 5 minute film, but my Newgrounds page is full of shorts, as well as links to my other pages.

[A Friend of Mine]

I saw some of your art works.Sorry but you should try harder. You should try better with proportions. Head is too big. Improve your shading style. Your art is too faded and i that way not eye-catching. You can try using more types of pencils and markers as you sometimes do. I still like hairs you draw. It's simple but little bit improved can looks really pretty.

NyanaCreation responds:

I know it is faded but i can't do anything about it i tried alot but it doesn't work (so sorry for that) my original art on paper have pretty thick lines and you can see well. for trying harder i'm sorry but i am already trying as hard as i can i started drawing two years ago and i'm still trying to learn, from youtube and artists i find with tutorials. i'm doing my best to make the best out of it but you can't just say that i should try harder. for the pencils i can try but i have only a couple markers and one type of pencil. we don't have it big on the money section so the good drawing matterial is pretty hard to get by as well that we don't have art stores around here :/ but i could try to line the drawing with black marker so you could see it in the future better (and i didn't shade at all to be honest i wanted to make somthing without shading)

but for the hair thank ^_^ i'm glad you atleast liked somthing. thanks for the tips.